Question: Are there any changes you would make to your essay?

The chronicle essay was an interesting process, due to the many steps I had to take. This essay required ultimately three drafts, each adding more sections to the timeline that the essay followed. The careful writing of this essay allowed me to ensure all my thoughts were added in clearly and the structure of my essay was easily understood. However, by taking too much time on this essay, I began to second-guess my writing choices. Although some of the changes I made did improve my writing, others were questionable. This was the case in the conclusion where I decided to remove an overview of the entire essay. Instead, I ended my essay with a call for change and the reasoning behind it. Although this ending was fine, I believe the overview would have helped my essay as it addressed all the points touched on and explained how certain changes were pivotal to the One Times Square structure.

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